Poem: Summer Haven
Here's a poem I wrote a little while back...obviously I was feeling wistful and just thinking about summer. I hope you like it.
Summer Haven
Faces melt under the blazing sun, wide eyes
Gaze at shadows lingering underneath low branches;
You call me to your side, beckoning
With gnarled fingers twisted from age;
I sit next to you, afraid to leave and be exposed
To unbearable heat, then I lean against you,
And feel your strong, solid body; see the hateful
Sun's light dancing through your spread fingers.
Juan Antonio Lopez
George
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Post a CommentAutumn, very cool!
Thanks, BB!
How are you today?
Awesome job hon! You are a wonderful writer.
Awwww, thanks, bfly!
Where'd BB go? lol
Hey girl, I just saw you pop up on rush.
Bfly, I agree. Autumn is an excellent writer!!
Hey, BB!
Awwww, y'all are making me blush! How are you lovely ladies?
I'm doing really well!
How are you? I miss the stories you used to post but, I
understand the copyright thing and all.
Those were really good. I used to look sooo forward to the next eppy.
Awww, BB, I actually just couldn't get into those for a while...maybe I'll start a new one sometime. Did I not even finish the last one I did?
Autumn, I don't think you did but, I could be wrong. My memory s*cks sometimes. But, I remember how we talked about copyrights..remember that? I understand...not being into something. I get like that a lot.
Yeah, I really think it was left unfinished...and I feel sorry for those who actually were reading them, like you. So sorry, BB!
Autumn, you are one of the best writers on Pop. You and KimmiAnn are the best.
WOW! Thanks for such a big compliment, Fancy04!
excellent Autumn! you write perfectly!! i like it:)
:)
Awww, thanks, Taz!
I'm glad you like it! I hope you guys know exactly what I was talking about in this poem, because I'm not sure
it really came across well.
hmm well first i liked how you described the heat and the shade becuz i could totally feel them hehe just by reading. are you sitting next to someone old aged?
I thought you were talking about sitting under a big old tree..with the sunlight coming through the limbs.
hehe different perceptions:P
Yeah.
BB, you're guess is what I was going for!
someone got it! lol Taz, your guess was good,
too!
*your
Cool!
ooooh noww i get it lol
Autumn the summer description was amazing cuz i honestly can see and feel it
Thanks, Taz!
BB, it's okay that you laughed!
Autumn, thanks.
Haha, you're welcome, BB...laugh at me all you want!
Sorry I just got back, I was busy.
I'm surprised you're still on, I was certain you would be off-line by now! Glad to see I was wrong!
Actually, I just got back on too! I was just happy/laughing that I wasn't the only one who has those weird pop days. I seem to have them quite often. lol
Really! That's so cool..that they were in your state!! I had to give my shoulder a break from typing. It's been acting up...I fractured it a long time ago, and I think the weather we are having is making it hurt. I watched a movie. Was AI good?
Yeah, they were in Memphis!
Awww, I'm sorry to hear about your shoulder, BB!
I hope the weather will get better soon so your shoulder will quit acting up! It was pretty good, but I've
never been a BIG fan of the auditions.
Autumn, I've never even seen the show!
We turned off the cable (which means
no TV at all) a few years ago, and haven't looked back. We do rent tons of movies though. We are considering getting it back but, I don't really care...so, I'm kind of up in the air about it.
It nice being TV free but then again, sometimes (rarely) I would like to have it.
I figured they would be in Nashville. I've never been to Memphis but, I bet it's nice. Thanks for the hug about my shoulder.
I feel like a
but, it's always done this off and on. lol at
beachbarbie, we did the same thing. no tv means one less fight with the kids and one less expense. someone at my girls school was saying that they pay $220 a month JUST for all the football games. insane!
Autumn, thanks about the
I love that smiley too.
Valeri & Autumn, it's weird what you can get used to (Val you know). We just got sick of the mindless stuff they show on TV, and wanted to take a break from it all. We just talked about it the other day and neither of us are like, "yeah, lets get it back!!". It is a big expense too when you don't even enjoy it or watch it much. I think we were paying over $200.00 a month when we had it but, we had a lot of the movie channels. It's really peaceful without the TV on constantly...we do work at home. Now, we play games like Scrabble and Trivial Pursuit so, I like the together time we have. I think I would really miss that. I hope that made sense. Oh, during the day we listen to talk radio (the news) while we work...or, I listen to music.
Awww, it sounds like you two are just fine without TV, BB!
That's awesome! I can't give
up all my fave shows, though.
Haha!
Autumn,
I wouldn't have been able to give it up at your age either, or even up to 28 years old. I
love 24, and we rent those. The shows I would be interested in seeing would be The Office and maybe, Ugly Betty. I love that smiley too.
Oh!!
What are some of your favorite shows? Watch you talk me into it. lol
do you guys think paula abdol is drinking?
she is on crack fantasia
Oh, idk, Taz...something's causing her to be loopy, lol.
LOL Autumn is fo shizzle hahahahaaha that biznitch is high as a mofo
I see yaya is misbehaving again.
A- this is a lovely poem. I really really like it. It makes me feel good and I'm not big on poems
Awww, thanks so much, J! I'm glad you liked it!
You're too kind, J!
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